12 Years Later (slight recon / reframeing)
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1995sonic1995
[Author note:No offense to the last author but they seemed to charge forward and leave a few things in question. So, I’m simply going to build off what they gave but give it some better framing. It doesn’t seem against the rules and I apologize if this comes off as rude that is not my intention.]


Slowly raising your head up your vision is a mess of racing blurring colors and a high-pitched whine. Your body ached deeply, muscles feeling as if they had been strained beyond measure. The first thing your able to lock onto is a horrible smell that seems to come and go at odd intervals. Trying to focus you can barely make out some things in the rushing flood. People, Places, some you know, some you don’t. Your bedroom filled with people. A great shaped clothed in some type of white blanket walking. The smiling faces of Lillian, Jen, Zuemy as the three of you rush down a hallway. A great pair of mountains raising up before you. Your mother about to give you a great big hug. The racing colors slowly begin to fade alongside the warm loving face of your mother. Leaving the sight of two great dark mountains looming above you.

The whining in your ears is broken by two distinct sounds. A wet grumbling and a firm grunt. Then an all to familure sound of a bottom belch that trumpeted in the air for what seemed like forever. Part of you was begging for the whining to come back. At least maybe it could have distracted you from the now gag inducing stench rolling over you. The ground shakes dramatically as the gaseous mountains raise above you on two pillars, your world going dark for a moment before being left wherever it was you are. … speaking of just where the heck were you?! The last thing you could remember was… That Phone call! Pushing yourself as best you could you were able to sit up. Looking yourself over..
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May 12, 2023