Giantess/Shrinking & Farts
One day, for reasons that escape your comprehension, you shrink really small (ranging from about 1/2 inch to 1/10 inch, 1cm to 1 millimeter approx. but other sizes are possible, usually no larger than an inch), and you don't really know why. Did someone do it? Did something cause it? Who, or what? Unfortunately for you, you won't get many chances to find out, as you have to try your best and survive as you're not alone. The girls that you were just hanging out with or happened to be around are now seemingly impossibly gigantic. You might try to alert them of your presence, but that might not end up being the best idea.
[This story is sort of a spiritual successor to TinyMan0001's 'Giantess/fart shrinking' stories, though not intended to be a carbon copy of it. One difference is that whether farts shrink you is up to whoever is writing, though I at least chose to leave the cause of shrinking mysterious at the beginning, and also because it slightly contradicts some backstory (I also left open the possibility for a girl to intentionally shrink you). However, like it, it's largely focused on the shrinking side, though I guess I can leave a branch dedicated for a giantess/growth route if anyone's interested on adding to that. Also, similarly, the girls may be aware or unaware of your shrunken form. Usually, I'd say they should progress from unaware to aware, depending on the girl and the situation though. I will admit I tend to do aware more than unaware, but unless it's been previously stated in a chapter, you can opt for either. I think unaware has huge potential I haven't tapped into myself.
At the end of the day, shrinking is a plot device, and it can be used in any way that helps keep the story going, as long as it doesn't contradict what was stated before. I probably won't have much time to do a whole lot of writing myself, so, besides setting up the initial routes, I'll be happy to let others unleash their creativity. I only ask for reasonable spelling (and this is coming from someone who has English as a 2nd language) and to at least make the chapter one or two paragraphs long. Let's not do choice one-liners, please.]
Character list can be found in the link above, I recommend checking it if you're not too familiar with the cast or if you want to check lore consistency. Of course, you can also reach me on discord or twitter and shoot me any questions.
1.- The shrinking is supposed to make you incredibly tough, borderline invulnerable, but you'll still feel the weight and pressure you're subjected to, so, the main character shouldn't die, unless there's a decent build up, and an alternative, nonlethal route. Another instance could be a regenerative ability, to reform after being crushed or digested, though only the latter has been used in a few routes.
2.- Being a giantess type interactive, it's almost an unspoken rule, but, there should be no other males in this story while you're shrunken, no giant males either. You can have casual interactions with other male characters before shrinking, or via flashbacks though (like some mentions of Blaise's father). It's also possible for you not to be alone when you shrink, so, there could be some other tinies along with you.
3.- Let's try to have consistency across chapters even if they're written by different people, always check the previous one. Some changes can be made on request, and depending on the change itself, I may edit accordingly.
4.- Not an overly strict rule, but chapters should be at least 2 or 3 paragraphs long.
5.- No scat. Sorry, I'm fine with butts and farts, and those are the main point of the story, but I draw the line there. That doesn't mean there can't be some measure of toilet content though (main character gets farted into it for example). I don't care much for piss, but it's not my thing, so I can't deliver it to the same quality standard I expect of myself for stuff I'm into.
6.- Similar to #5, the main focus of this story is booty (it also includes crushing/sitting) and farts (but they're not mandatory), but other types of content aren't strictly forbidden. Boobs are cool, and I'm indifferent to feet, but I'd rather not make them the focus. Sweat is okay, and anal vore is also alright, as long as it doesn't go into scat. In the case of vore routes, I'd rather have those parts skipped, and Blaise getting farted out.
[Update to rule 6]: You can have Blaise go as deep into the gut as you'd like, as long as you don't make any explicit mentions of scat.
7.- Not a straight rule per se, but, unless Blaise is buried under tons of flesh, he can usually be heard if he speaks, but that's personal preference. If you want to have a route where he can't be heard, that's fine but check the chapters before for the sake of consistency.
8.- NEW RULE: Extra important too! I can't believe I kinda have to state this outrright, but it's best not to leave any room for doubt: Guys, I'm all for referencing stuff, but you've seen that almost every chapter I write is original even if I may borrow or parody stuff from other sources. Please do NOT plagiarize stuff, neither from other writing.com stories nor from outside ones! I'll have to delete those chapters out of respect to the original authors. Thanks.
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I really like the chapters that involve Yamile and her family as well as Carmen and Maya. I hope to see more of those either with Yamile or the other siblings that have been mentioned. I also hope to see more of Carmen and Maya
Gotta say, Blaise looks VERY happy between Sheila's cheeks in her commission art. It gives off a certain impression of his feelings towards her that puts a smile on my own face—she's one of, if not my favourite character!
Here's the link to the comm'd art: https://1drv.ms/f/c/7be889dcf80a4c88/IgBRzMBRFegdS5v71SbccaU3AYpKTZVjmvbUKfYEW4D4YBE?e=m4qflN
Oh, I haven't updated those in a long time. Thanks for the reminder
Just checked some of the art links you've already sent in the doc, I keep getting an invalid redirect from writing.com for whatever reason. Might be better to upload the images directly.
Not a bad idea. I don't know why I never did, they are on my Discord server and I should probably post a thread on Twitter. But yeah I will be posting the commissioned art under its own section soon.
Actually, have you considered adding the illustrations of the characters to the Google Doc?
Initially it was a requirement to do it in 2nd person actually but 3rd person is acceptable. 1st person isn't really used and not encouraged.
I am having trouble remembering and I don't see it so I'll ask. It is a requirement the writing be in first person, or can it be from third-person so long as its consistent?
I'd rather set up an alt for it first but yeah I could join at some point
I wasn't familiar with them or their work until I looked it up right now. But here's the thing, I can't get too expensive comms, like my range is 20-40 bucks per piece max, ideally colored. Also, here's the link to my server if you want to reach me more easily https://discord.gg/5VzDmnux7q
Do you know ProButtonMasher?
I've been doing so, stopped temporarily due to a change in my home situation but I plan on getting back to it. The comms can be found in my discord server. Still, who do you have in mind?
Have you thought about commissioning someone to make art of the cast? There's a few I've seen that would most likely be more than happy to get involved.
Appreciate it—still, I'd like to be as faithful in my portrayal as I can, even as I go in a certain general direction. Otherwise readers might find it a bit disorienting, y'know? Anything in particular I could improve on in a given chapter I've written, I'd like to.
I've been reading them and I don't see any glaring issues. I like this scenario, some of my chapters even implied something like this could happen. There could be an argument about Blaise's characterization but again, I take it as a "What if" kind of thing so it's fine for me. I assume it's coming later but what I'd like to see more is emphasis on the size aspect, Sheila's already damn huge at normal size but at shrunken size dat ass is truly massive. Once the biggest in the interactive, lol.
ALSO also, I'd love some constructive criticism on my writing of Sheila's character in my recent additions to the first "beach" path. Is there anything I could improve on in post-publish editing, or is it accurate enough to how you envision her in terms of speech patterns, reactions etc.?
I'll comment under the ones I noticed.
Thanks! Let me know which ones. This story has been going on for nearly 5 years and well, my writing has gotten better over time so I suppose some of the older routes have some issues. Also I struggle with the 10k character limit of writing.com
Also, have you thought about maybe updating the text flow of some chapters you've written in terms of things like punctuation etc.? The quality tends to vary a lot for some of the paths I'm more interested in, and I guess I'd just like to see that quality streamlined a bit.
Makes sense, I guess. I'd love to see more paths where Sheila plays a major role in that, too—either for her own sake or her daughter's (if not both, depending on the route)
I'll take that into account for some routes, ideally he should be develop it over time because otherwise it'd go against his character too much lol. Routes where Lillian has strong chances to get him to be her bf lend themselves pretty well for this kind of scenario.
NGL I'd love to see paths where Blaise actually does have a fart fetish he's trying to keep secret
NotOnTime's working on some other stuff, yes. Lillian's beach route will also be revisited eventually and he recently did some great chapters in the microverse with Miriam
Hay man, Just wanted to say that I hope you're doing well and thank you for taking time to write such a long and detailed story for us to read for free. ^^ Though if you don't mind me asking, do you know if NotOnTime is ever planning to do a new/different route? Not that im trying to come off as whiny or complaining, just genuinely curious since they write such great erotica.
I can add your idea to my backlog but it will take some time to get there. There's already a more developed route done by NotOnTime that largely fulfills the same ideas though.
On chapter 7 which is called found by Sheila, could you start on Worlds biggest gas chamber?
Yeah, I do. Sorry, I've slowed down due to health issues but I'm almost always open to requests. It might take a bit for it to get done but still, what is it?
Do you take requests on a certain chapter?
This story just hit its 3rd anniversary on Writing.com, where it hails from. It's been only 5 months here but still, I want to thank everyone who's stuck around on either or both sites. The Collaberotica staff have been nothing but kind and accommodating and I can't be thankful enough for helping me bring such a huge story over. It's been a hell of a ride and I don't plan on quitting anytime soon, as long as I'm still alive, I plan on keeping going with this.
As of today, the story has been fully caught up to the writing.com original