YellowBlack seems unfazed. Perhaps he hasn't noticed yet...?
Well, in any case, let's pull a "one-two punch" here. Let's destroy two plot threads.
So Carolyn starts to carry Jake in her breasts, as per Elizabeth's request?
Easy-peasy-lemon-fucking-squeezy. Hell, you could write two crazy chapters about this.
Carolyn's personality must be messed with... Easy solution. Make her a stripper or dancer or something.
You begin to wonder if there's any situation at all in which a girl having a boy between her breasts can't be in some way sexy. Maybe if she's a garbage-woman?
No, but you must make her/Jake depraved, not gross. This should be sickening to those of super high conservative values.
You make Carolyn a risque dancer and have Jake, looking for safety from her bouncing breasts, head to her nipple. Then he gets sucked inside somehow.
That's weird enough, right?
Well.... We'll just have to see how YellowBlack reacts. It doesn't matter what you write if it doesn't freak him out. That's the whole purpose here!
Well, in any case, let's pull a "one-two punch" here. Let's destroy two plot threads.
So Carolyn starts to carry Jake in her breasts, as per Elizabeth's request?
Easy-peasy-lemon-fucking-squeezy. Hell, you could write two crazy chapters about this.
Carolyn's personality must be messed with... Easy solution. Make her a stripper or dancer or something.
You begin to wonder if there's any situation at all in which a girl having a boy between her breasts can't be in some way sexy. Maybe if she's a garbage-woman?
No, but you must make her/Jake depraved, not gross. This should be sickening to those of super high conservative values.
You make Carolyn a risque dancer and have Jake, looking for safety from her bouncing breasts, head to her nipple. Then he gets sucked inside somehow.
That's weird enough, right?
Well.... We'll just have to see how YellowBlack reacts. It doesn't matter what you write if it doesn't freak him out. That's the whole purpose here!
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May 12, 2023
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