You feel like only some really sweet new microphilic interactives from (one of) your favorite erotica websites, writing.com, could possibly alleviate your stress, so you boot up the ol' micro-compy and log into Writing.com as TheRealBlueSky. (You deleted your old account.)
...Well, let's see... Nothing new on "Phil Tiny"... nor on "The Graduate"... Oh, look! "A Tiny Child" by YellowBlack updated last night! Woah, nice! This is easily one of your favorite interactives on the site, despite its short length. Anyway, let's see the new chapter...
"Oh Jake, please come join us in the hot tub would you deari said" Carolyn your mother who was in said hot tub which I mentioned earlier." You feel a lump in yruo throat. "But mom" you (Jake) say "where is thAmanda (your sister)" you say. Oh by the way in case I didn not yet mention it Carolyn's breasts are really fucking ginormous.
So you get in the tub. Carolyn coos and is "com here" swwety and she attempts to hug you to her body but you are swept into her large but tight cleavage because of your small size and the water current. Carolyn's breasts are really ginormous. And you are not. You are stuck between her ginormous breasts and your swimming trunks were swept away so your penis is BUT SUDDENLY
1. She notices you
2. Nope she doesn't she's all "whar ScottJake go"
3. Her ginormous breasts are ginormous
That was..... Underwhelming. You know, to be honest, it's not a good story, overall. YellowBlack isn't even that good of a writer. You feel that while he does write long-ish chapters (a rarity on writing.com's erotic interactives), he just writes a whole lotta fluff into them. Every chapter of his could be condensed into maybe one paragraph. The guy probably thinks he's such a hotshot, but, really, he's got to stop messing with dumb wordplay and start not-messing with editing.
And besides that; the guy seems like a one-trick pony. He can't seem to write anything other than "Lol ur mom's tits are what you are lost between. Does she feel you in her ginormous tits? y/n." Who likes incestuous stories, anyway? Gross.
Man, the guy didn't even gift you the GP he promised he would give to anyone who added a chapter to "A Tiny Child"!
...So, fuck it. Let's see if your own interactive, "Miniature Masseur," has any adds.
...Nope.
Surely 4 choice chapters are enough to get the ball rolling???
You figure all the other contributors on Writing.com are just jerks.
ESPECIALLY YellowBlack.
If you ever meet him in real life (and somehow realize it's him) you feel like punching him in the face.
Unless he's normal-sized or is actually a she.
...Well, let's see... Nothing new on "Phil Tiny"... nor on "The Graduate"... Oh, look! "A Tiny Child" by YellowBlack updated last night! Woah, nice! This is easily one of your favorite interactives on the site, despite its short length. Anyway, let's see the new chapter...
"Oh Jake, please come join us in the hot tub would you deari said" Carolyn your mother who was in said hot tub which I mentioned earlier." You feel a lump in yruo throat. "But mom" you (Jake) say "where is thAmanda (your sister)" you say. Oh by the way in case I didn not yet mention it Carolyn's breasts are really fucking ginormous.
So you get in the tub. Carolyn coos and is "com here" swwety and she attempts to hug you to her body but you are swept into her large but tight cleavage because of your small size and the water current. Carolyn's breasts are really ginormous. And you are not. You are stuck between her ginormous breasts and your swimming trunks were swept away so your penis is BUT SUDDENLY
1. She notices you
2. Nope she doesn't she's all "whar ScottJake go"
3. Her ginormous breasts are ginormous
That was..... Underwhelming. You know, to be honest, it's not a good story, overall. YellowBlack isn't even that good of a writer. You feel that while he does write long-ish chapters (a rarity on writing.com's erotic interactives), he just writes a whole lotta fluff into them. Every chapter of his could be condensed into maybe one paragraph. The guy probably thinks he's such a hotshot, but, really, he's got to stop messing with dumb wordplay and start not-messing with editing.
And besides that; the guy seems like a one-trick pony. He can't seem to write anything other than "Lol ur mom's tits are what you are lost between. Does she feel you in her ginormous tits? y/n." Who likes incestuous stories, anyway? Gross.
Man, the guy didn't even gift you the GP he promised he would give to anyone who added a chapter to "A Tiny Child"!
...So, fuck it. Let's see if your own interactive, "Miniature Masseur," has any adds.
...Nope.
Surely 4 choice chapters are enough to get the ball rolling???
You figure all the other contributors on Writing.com are just jerks.
ESPECIALLY YellowBlack.
If you ever meet him in real life (and somehow realize it's him) you feel like punching him in the face.
Unless he's normal-sized or is actually a she.
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May 12, 2023
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