Adventures in Mom's Belly Family's New Shrink Ray chapter 9 by copier · original author: marcinballa

Derek was in a race against the clock. He knew he did not have long until his mother's digestive acids started to tear away at him. He quickly pulled out his cell phone and activated the flashlight. His mom's stomach was obviously very dark due to the lack of any light and he needed to find the shrink ray if he had any hope of getting rescued by his mother.

Observing his surroundings, he could see the cauldron he was in was filled with a warm, bubbling, yellowish-green soup. The only large thing of any note in his mom's stomach appeared to be a piece of what looked like chocolate cake. "Must've been a late night snack," Derek thought to himself, as there appeared to be very little damage done to it by his mom's stomach acids.

Derek waded his way through the sludge until he reached the oasis that was the piece of chocolate cake. Then Derek caught his first lucky break. He noticed something shining, wedged up against the sponge-like texture of the cake. Crawling down the piece of cake, he could see that it was the shrink ray.

"Thank god," Derek thought to himself, nearly brought to tears of joy. He would be able to grow back to normal size, once he found a way to exit his mom. Derek's mind now shifted to finding a way to escape the prison that was his mother's stomach. He could hear her heart beating and what sounded like an occasional moan.

What Derek did not realize was that his mom was already awake due to some discomfort in her stomach. Derek took out his phone and began pondering what to do next. He could try to either text or call his mom, but who knew if she would answer and believe him, let alone he did not know what kind of reception her stomach got.

As he was considering this he heard what sounded like a fizzling noise. Turning his flashlight back on, he was alarmed to see that his island of chocolate cake was now much smaller. It looked like his mom's stomach acids were going to town on her late dessert. Starting to get worried, Derek knew he needed to make a decision quickly.

Does he try to contact his mom, or does he grow the remaining chocolate cake much larger to by himself time?
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November 12
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