Derek gets swallowed
Family's New Shrink Ray
chapter 8
by
copier
· original author:
marcinballa
Even though Derek was putting forth his very best effort to battle the current of his mother's saliva as well as the beast that was her tongue, it was not enough. Derek could feel himself sliding, slowly but surely, towards the edge Debbie's throat.
In a last ditch effort, Derek tried to dive forward, but it was too late. He now felt himself falling again, this time only slower. Rather than a dark water slide, this seemed like a slow and steady descent into hell. The slimy walls of his mother's throats gripped him tightly, and he soon realized he was about to go through a sphincter into the churning cavern that was her stomach.
Derek fell into Debbie's stomach with a splash. He resurfaced, hyperventilating. The liquid around him tasted absolutely wretched when he got sole in his mouth, but it did not burn, yet. Derek knew he had a very limited time down here, so he had to figure out an escape plan and fast.
Taking out his cell phone, Derek noticed it had a full charge and used it to illuminate the inside of his mother. He needed to find that shrink ray.
--
On the outside, Debbie had woken up temporarily. She had a weird dream she was eating something and now had an uncomfortable stomachache in real life. Plus she thought she heard someone calling "mom."
"Oh fuck," Debbie whispered, clutching her stomach. She repositioned her pillow so she was now sitting up in the bed.
Who's perspective do you follow next?
In a last ditch effort, Derek tried to dive forward, but it was too late. He now felt himself falling again, this time only slower. Rather than a dark water slide, this seemed like a slow and steady descent into hell. The slimy walls of his mother's throats gripped him tightly, and he soon realized he was about to go through a sphincter into the churning cavern that was her stomach.
Derek fell into Debbie's stomach with a splash. He resurfaced, hyperventilating. The liquid around him tasted absolutely wretched when he got sole in his mouth, but it did not burn, yet. Derek knew he had a very limited time down here, so he had to figure out an escape plan and fast.
Taking out his cell phone, Derek noticed it had a full charge and used it to illuminate the inside of his mother. He needed to find that shrink ray.
--
On the outside, Debbie had woken up temporarily. She had a weird dream she was eating something and now had an uncomfortable stomachache in real life. Plus she thought she heard someone calling "mom."
"Oh fuck," Debbie whispered, clutching her stomach. She repositioned her pillow so she was now sitting up in the bed.
Who's perspective do you follow next?
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