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Family's New Shrink Ray
chapter 15
by
copier
· original author:
smashedunder
"Ahm..." Bianca spoke up. "Are we really going to start this sequel with something as boring as... a bus or a taxi? After eating a train and a literal jet?"
"It's just the opening," Nicole pointed out. "It doesn't need to be flashy."
"Actually," Patricia cut in. "B has a point. For once." Bianca mean-mugged as Patricia went on. "We'll need to be a bit more creative with our options this time if we want to make a bigger splash than we did before."
Nicole scanned her friends. "Since when are you guys experts on narrative design? Okay then, what did you have in mind?"
Patricia took in a breath.
"Instead of focusing on an individual vehicle, let's think about a new setting! Somewhere like the beach, or a lake with lots of people. Or heck, we could even shrink a school!"
"Are you saying we shrink a beach?"
Patricia sighed at Bianca. "No, idiot. I'm saying we could shrink other people at the beach and then film you normal sized. It's a beach--it all looks kind of the same no matter what scale you are. Then you can put on your best swimsuit and come out the water all shiny, but from the scales you'd be like Godzilla! It'd be wicked cool."
A swimsuit!? Bianca was blushing just thinking about it. She'd already received a lot of added attention from the first movie--showing more skin would doubtless result in even greater views from devoted fans as well as new people who could fall in love with her movie star looks for the first time.
Nicole on the other hand was thinking more about the school idea. Unlike a beach, it was feasible to shrink and abscond with a school building, which would definitely make filming more flexible. Of course, the decision of which school to shrink would need to be made; her own? She definitely wouldn't mind if a few dings on her permanent record were... unceremoniously wiped out. Or perhaps a school her brother or sister goes to? Or a different one entirely? There were lots of things to consider... that is, if they heeded Patty's idea.
"It's just the opening," Nicole pointed out. "It doesn't need to be flashy."
"Actually," Patricia cut in. "B has a point. For once." Bianca mean-mugged as Patricia went on. "We'll need to be a bit more creative with our options this time if we want to make a bigger splash than we did before."
Nicole scanned her friends. "Since when are you guys experts on narrative design? Okay then, what did you have in mind?"
Patricia took in a breath.
"Instead of focusing on an individual vehicle, let's think about a new setting! Somewhere like the beach, or a lake with lots of people. Or heck, we could even shrink a school!"
"Are you saying we shrink a beach?"
Patricia sighed at Bianca. "No, idiot. I'm saying we could shrink other people at the beach and then film you normal sized. It's a beach--it all looks kind of the same no matter what scale you are. Then you can put on your best swimsuit and come out the water all shiny, but from the scales you'd be like Godzilla! It'd be wicked cool."
A swimsuit!? Bianca was blushing just thinking about it. She'd already received a lot of added attention from the first movie--showing more skin would doubtless result in even greater views from devoted fans as well as new people who could fall in love with her movie star looks for the first time.
Nicole on the other hand was thinking more about the school idea. Unlike a beach, it was feasible to shrink and abscond with a school building, which would definitely make filming more flexible. Of course, the decision of which school to shrink would need to be made; her own? She definitely wouldn't mind if a few dings on her permanent record were... unceremoniously wiped out. Or perhaps a school her brother or sister goes to? Or a different one entirely? There were lots of things to consider... that is, if they heeded Patty's idea.
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