A Million Hits Family's New Shrink Ray chapter 12 by copier · original author: smashedunder

Nicole's jaw dropped, and she left the laundryroom posthaste, still on the phone.

"You're serious?"

"Yeah!!" said Bianca. "It's going up right now!"

Just then, Patricia called her, and Nicole haphazardly patched her in. It was now a three-way call between them.

"Have you seen?!" asked Patricia.

"I'm... checking... now..." Nicole logged into her Youtube account and saw, with shock, that their horror film had 96 thousand views, and counting.

"But that can't be right... I just checked it last night and it wasn't even at 20!"

"Maybe some big influencer saw it and shared it!" Bianca couldn't contain her giddiness. "Check out some of these comments!"

Nicole scrolled down into the comment section.

Man, these effects looked so real it was sorta creeping me out. I've never seen a short film with that much realism before. Brava

What are you talking about lol, those screams looked totally fake.

If I were going to get eaten I'd hope it was by a cute half-black latina 🤤

In response: FBI OPEN UP

Whoever's playing the monster sucks at acting. Sounds so lame. Effects are decent though

This is the best short film i have ever seen in my life. part 2 when???

The interior of the stomach looked insaaaane... how do you even get that kind of footage? Theres no way that was cgi...

Is it wrong i feel a little turned on by this lol

And many, many, many more comments of all types. There were over a thousand, and with every one that Nicole read, three more pushed that one down the page a notch.

"This is so insane!" cheered Patricia. "Hey, Bianca, I think some of these commenters wanna date you..."

"You tell them that they can meet me riiiiiiight in here," said Bianca, and neither Patricia nor Nicole had to guess too hard where on her body Bianca was pointing. All three of them laughed hard.

They chatted as the viewticker went up. "Man," said Nicole. "I could watch this for hours."

"Well, you know what we should do?" said Patricia?

Both Bianca and Nicole waited for Patricia to finish.

"We should...
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