"E"-line for "Esophagus"
Family's New Shrink Ray
chapter 8
by
copier
· original author:
smashedunder
Nicole gasped. "Why me?!"
Patricia explained, "Because I had to be the camerawoman last time. And Bianca can't do it since she's the monster!"
"Come on!" said Nicole. "Bianca?"
Bianca just shrugged. "Just do what she said, Nicole. Don't you want this movie to be the best it could be?"
To tell the truth, Nicole was still salty that she hadn't had the opportunity to play the monster. She was about to protest again but then Patricia pointed the shrink ray at her. "C'mon, Nicole," Patricia said. "The doors are about to open..."
The subway had lurched to a stop. Nicole shifted in her light jacket and pajamas. Then she sighed. "Fine..."
"YAAAAY!!!" cheered both Bianca and Patricia. Nicole stomped into the subway doors just as they closed.
"Okay," said Patricia. "Watch this." She aimed the gun just as the train began to lurch forward. Before picking up much speed however, it was suddenly blasted by a great beam of light, and it shrank rapidly, rapidly, falling from the tracks, no bigger than a model train set.
"Oh hell yeah!" Patricia leapt from the side of the station and onto the tracks, being careful to avoid the rails. She didn't know which if any had electricity in them and didn't want to find out. She picked up the train -- it was made up of eight cars, each one about the length of her pointer finger and could more or less be wrapped around entirely by her own hand. She peered inside and saw the passengers all banging helplessly against the windows, and eventually was able to spot Nicole giving a nervous thumbs up amidst the crowd.
"She's alright!" Patricia cheered. Bianca sighed in relief. Patricia carefully navigated the rails again and handed the train off to Bianca, who set it aside before helping Patricia back onto the platform.
"Let's get out of here before anyone notices the train is missing," said Bianca. She picked up the train. Patricia shrank Nicole's bike and pocketed it and the girls jogged to a nearby park. It was still pretty dark outside, but it was getting lighter.
"Okay..." Bianca looked at the train. She held it in her hands. She gripped the conductor car and allowed the rest to flop downward, about to her hip. And suddenly, Bianca had a cruel idea.
"Are you filming?" Bianca said.
Patricia noticed Bianca's preparation, and suddenly pulled her own phone from her pocket and hit record.
Bianca looked back at the train. She saw the conductor car and the terrified conductor within. Then she stuck it into her mouth, surrounding the shrunken car with darkness. The car swished and sloshed as Bianca's tongue thrashed it. It was sort of like sucking on a rough popsicle. It didn't taste good, but the knowledge there were people inside of it made up for that.
With a quick gnash of her teeth, Bianca chomped the coupling linking the conductor car to the rest of the train, sending it down into an acrid grave.
"Wowwwwww..." Patricia was in awe. She was circling Bianca as Bianca lorded her power over the shrunken train, and though she'd already know that Bianca was capable of swallowing the vehicle, it was still a surprise to see it actually happen.
On the inside, Nicole was equally impressed. She was having trouble navigating the train car, constantly being turned upside down and swung around and around like a lasso. Several passengers got whiplash, and she was sure at least a few had been bludgeoned by the rapid movement. Nicole however was young and nimble and was able to avoid the worst of it.
The train was the perfect toy, flexible and lightweight. Bianca was licking across its surface, granting Nicole to get some excellent shots of the giantess's tongue and mouth fogging up the side-view windows. Nicole made sure to catch footage of the crying students on the train, none of whom could've imagined this random morning would lead to them getting tormented by a random middle-schooler and be filmed by her friends.
Bianca was lying on the ground, twisting the train between her toes. The sun was up and the air was getting a bit hot, making her feel sort of sweaty. She called to Patricia, "How is the footage looking?" Patricia gave a great thumbs up. Bianca then continued, "Okay, because I have a great idea for an ending. Text Nicole to stay at the very front of the train car, okay?"
Then, Bianca gripped the train and looked into it. The vehicle was battered and broken, as were the people inside. The windows were cracked and shattered in some places, and simply sullied with spit in others. Once again, Bianca stared at the people inside with a chilly glare.
"OKAY, BUGS. I THINK IT'S ABOUT TIME I ENDED THIS. HOPE YOU ENJOYED THIS PLAYTIME, BECAUSE YOU'RE NEVER SEEING THE SUN AGAIN...!"
Bianca opened her mouth. "AHHHHHHHHH..."
She tilted her head back and dangled the train above her gaping maw, lowering it like a claw machine until the frontmost car hit the back of her throat. This front car also housed Nicole, who was struggling to avoid the people now beginning to pile on top of her. It was hard work, but the show must go on. She aimed her phone at the windows, but struggled to get good footage.
Just then, another falling body from far in the back of the train slammed into the front window, knocking it out and creating a slot for Nicole to film the video through. The man was sucked into Bianca's esophagus, but now Bianca could more clearly see where exactly they were going.
The car emerged in the cavern of Bianca's stomach. Another train car floated in the stomach acid pool, which had dissolved a lot in the intervening time. The corpse of the conductor was less dissolved, but still very dead, as was that man who had inadvertently saved the film.
"Cool...!" Nicole was able to get some fantastic footage. The walls pulsated and vibrated with life. The stomach acids seeped a hazy mist that made Nicole cough and looked oh so real. Nicole was able to dodge more falling passengers, all of whom screamed and floundered in the muck.
Bianca was having trouble resisting her gag reflex as she swallowed more and more of the train into her mouth. It felt very much like how one might imagine swallowing a snake, or how one might remember swallowing a spaghetti noodle, just on a larger scale. It was difficult, but she managed.
"Duuuuude...!" Patricia got closeups of the train, of Bianca's face, and of her neck as the train cars bulged through her throat. "This is so totally epic!"
Bianca couldn't respond, so she just nodded and returned to dropping the train down her throat. It was almost completely inside, but she couldn't be too quick. She had to hold it here and give Nicole time to get out.
Nicole's car was nearing the acid pool. The high-res footage of the stomach acid was insane, and quite literally to die for. She took copious video, trying to get it from every angle she was capable of, and so barely even realized that the frontmost car had actually touched the acid bath. The sizzle stung her nose, and Nicole realized, this was probably when she should go.
Nicole turned away from the knocked out front window and began to climb up the train. She pocketed her phone, satisfied with the footage, and leapt from seat to seat. It was a long trek, what with 8 cars and all, but Nicole was a quick and swift climber. And this was important, because she could feel the rumbling. Something was happening! But the rear emergency door was so close! Nicole was almost there! Annnnnnd...
GULP!!!
Bianca swallowed the last of the train. And everyone who still remained alive slithered down her throat, as the subway curled into a metallic tomb.
"Ahhhhh... that really hit the spot!" Bianca cheered. Then she realized...
Patricia explained, "Because I had to be the camerawoman last time. And Bianca can't do it since she's the monster!"
"Come on!" said Nicole. "Bianca?"
Bianca just shrugged. "Just do what she said, Nicole. Don't you want this movie to be the best it could be?"
To tell the truth, Nicole was still salty that she hadn't had the opportunity to play the monster. She was about to protest again but then Patricia pointed the shrink ray at her. "C'mon, Nicole," Patricia said. "The doors are about to open..."
The subway had lurched to a stop. Nicole shifted in her light jacket and pajamas. Then she sighed. "Fine..."
"YAAAAY!!!" cheered both Bianca and Patricia. Nicole stomped into the subway doors just as they closed.
"Okay," said Patricia. "Watch this." She aimed the gun just as the train began to lurch forward. Before picking up much speed however, it was suddenly blasted by a great beam of light, and it shrank rapidly, rapidly, falling from the tracks, no bigger than a model train set.
"Oh hell yeah!" Patricia leapt from the side of the station and onto the tracks, being careful to avoid the rails. She didn't know which if any had electricity in them and didn't want to find out. She picked up the train -- it was made up of eight cars, each one about the length of her pointer finger and could more or less be wrapped around entirely by her own hand. She peered inside and saw the passengers all banging helplessly against the windows, and eventually was able to spot Nicole giving a nervous thumbs up amidst the crowd.
"She's alright!" Patricia cheered. Bianca sighed in relief. Patricia carefully navigated the rails again and handed the train off to Bianca, who set it aside before helping Patricia back onto the platform.
"Let's get out of here before anyone notices the train is missing," said Bianca. She picked up the train. Patricia shrank Nicole's bike and pocketed it and the girls jogged to a nearby park. It was still pretty dark outside, but it was getting lighter.
"Okay..." Bianca looked at the train. She held it in her hands. She gripped the conductor car and allowed the rest to flop downward, about to her hip. And suddenly, Bianca had a cruel idea.
"Are you filming?" Bianca said.
Patricia noticed Bianca's preparation, and suddenly pulled her own phone from her pocket and hit record.
Bianca looked back at the train. She saw the conductor car and the terrified conductor within. Then she stuck it into her mouth, surrounding the shrunken car with darkness. The car swished and sloshed as Bianca's tongue thrashed it. It was sort of like sucking on a rough popsicle. It didn't taste good, but the knowledge there were people inside of it made up for that.
With a quick gnash of her teeth, Bianca chomped the coupling linking the conductor car to the rest of the train, sending it down into an acrid grave.
"Wowwwwww..." Patricia was in awe. She was circling Bianca as Bianca lorded her power over the shrunken train, and though she'd already know that Bianca was capable of swallowing the vehicle, it was still a surprise to see it actually happen.
On the inside, Nicole was equally impressed. She was having trouble navigating the train car, constantly being turned upside down and swung around and around like a lasso. Several passengers got whiplash, and she was sure at least a few had been bludgeoned by the rapid movement. Nicole however was young and nimble and was able to avoid the worst of it.
The train was the perfect toy, flexible and lightweight. Bianca was licking across its surface, granting Nicole to get some excellent shots of the giantess's tongue and mouth fogging up the side-view windows. Nicole made sure to catch footage of the crying students on the train, none of whom could've imagined this random morning would lead to them getting tormented by a random middle-schooler and be filmed by her friends.
Bianca was lying on the ground, twisting the train between her toes. The sun was up and the air was getting a bit hot, making her feel sort of sweaty. She called to Patricia, "How is the footage looking?" Patricia gave a great thumbs up. Bianca then continued, "Okay, because I have a great idea for an ending. Text Nicole to stay at the very front of the train car, okay?"
Then, Bianca gripped the train and looked into it. The vehicle was battered and broken, as were the people inside. The windows were cracked and shattered in some places, and simply sullied with spit in others. Once again, Bianca stared at the people inside with a chilly glare.
"OKAY, BUGS. I THINK IT'S ABOUT TIME I ENDED THIS. HOPE YOU ENJOYED THIS PLAYTIME, BECAUSE YOU'RE NEVER SEEING THE SUN AGAIN...!"
Bianca opened her mouth. "AHHHHHHHHH..."
She tilted her head back and dangled the train above her gaping maw, lowering it like a claw machine until the frontmost car hit the back of her throat. This front car also housed Nicole, who was struggling to avoid the people now beginning to pile on top of her. It was hard work, but the show must go on. She aimed her phone at the windows, but struggled to get good footage.
Just then, another falling body from far in the back of the train slammed into the front window, knocking it out and creating a slot for Nicole to film the video through. The man was sucked into Bianca's esophagus, but now Bianca could more clearly see where exactly they were going.
The car emerged in the cavern of Bianca's stomach. Another train car floated in the stomach acid pool, which had dissolved a lot in the intervening time. The corpse of the conductor was less dissolved, but still very dead, as was that man who had inadvertently saved the film.
"Cool...!" Nicole was able to get some fantastic footage. The walls pulsated and vibrated with life. The stomach acids seeped a hazy mist that made Nicole cough and looked oh so real. Nicole was able to dodge more falling passengers, all of whom screamed and floundered in the muck.
Bianca was having trouble resisting her gag reflex as she swallowed more and more of the train into her mouth. It felt very much like how one might imagine swallowing a snake, or how one might remember swallowing a spaghetti noodle, just on a larger scale. It was difficult, but she managed.
"Duuuuude...!" Patricia got closeups of the train, of Bianca's face, and of her neck as the train cars bulged through her throat. "This is so totally epic!"
Bianca couldn't respond, so she just nodded and returned to dropping the train down her throat. It was almost completely inside, but she couldn't be too quick. She had to hold it here and give Nicole time to get out.
Nicole's car was nearing the acid pool. The high-res footage of the stomach acid was insane, and quite literally to die for. She took copious video, trying to get it from every angle she was capable of, and so barely even realized that the frontmost car had actually touched the acid bath. The sizzle stung her nose, and Nicole realized, this was probably when she should go.
Nicole turned away from the knocked out front window and began to climb up the train. She pocketed her phone, satisfied with the footage, and leapt from seat to seat. It was a long trek, what with 8 cars and all, but Nicole was a quick and swift climber. And this was important, because she could feel the rumbling. Something was happening! But the rear emergency door was so close! Nicole was almost there! Annnnnnd...
GULP!!!
Bianca swallowed the last of the train. And everyone who still remained alive slithered down her throat, as the subway curled into a metallic tomb.
"Ahhhhh... that really hit the spot!" Bianca cheered. Then she realized...
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