Something in the water
Family's New Shrink Ray
chapter 18
by
copier
· original author:
pats2015
The three friends continued to paddle away leaving the doomed woman to her grizzly fate. Her cries become more agonizing to listen to and their distance does nothing to soften their guilt. Nicole just wished she would stop. Just then all three heard a shrill scream before it was abruptly cut off followed by the sound of splashing. The girls looked behind them to see the girl was gone.
"Well, glad that's over." Patricia said.
"Wait...what happened to her?" Nicole asked.
"She probably just sank to the bottom." Bianca replied.
"Guys I have a bad feeling about this." Nicole said nervously.
"Can we just get out of here already? I'm starting to get scared." Bianca said sheepishly.
Patricia became annoyed with her two friends. They still needed more filler for their horror movie. And these shots of the decaying bodies and skeletons were perfect.
"Both of you stop being such babies! We're all safe on this raft. Besides we need some more of footage to pad the movie's runtime."
"Easy for you to say. You two just got here. I've seen enough of this and want to go home." Bianca responded.
"Just a few more minutes Bianca. Why don't you stop bitching and focus on filming. And you Nicole keep paddling." Patricia ordered her two friends. With that Nicole picked up her oar and Bianca pointed her cell phone.
The girls did as they were told and continued to explore the horrors of Maria's stomach chamber. As they observed all the digesting corpses Patricia was already thinking about how to enhance the fear for the audience. Maybe she should put a black & white filter with some creepy music playing in the background. She was thinking of all these cool ideas when she felt their raft get rammed from behind.
The jarring impact had all three of the girls grab the edges for stability.
"What the hell was that?" Nicole shouted.
"We must have hit a rock or something?" Patricia tried to rationalize.
"There are no rocks in my mom's stomach! Are you stupid?" Bianca shouted.
"Bianca I wouldn't put it past your mom. That woman is a freak. She ate us thinking we were bugs without any hesitation." Patricia retorted.
"I didn't hear you complaining when we were casting her as our movie monster." Bianca fired back.
"Both of you shut up for a minute. I think I hear something."
All three of the girls went quiet. Indeed along with the organic noises in the background it sounded like something was moving in the the stomach juices.
"Bianca flash your light over there." Nicole directed her friend.
Indeed they could see a ripple forming in the water. It continued towards them gradually building up speed. The girls stared at the disturbance when the saw a bright orange fin emerge. Whatever this was it was on a direct path for their raft.
"Keep rowing!" Patricia shouted.
Nicole furiously rowed desperately to get them away from this thing but it was far too fast and right on their tale. The girls were looking forward when the thing emerges and jumps out of the stomach acids. Turning around to see it they get their first look at the horrific creature stalking them.
The thing is the size of a great white. Its body have been eaten away at by Maria's stomach acid. Parts of it's body now just covered by patches of raw red scales. What was once it's tale is whittled down a sharp spear of bone. Most horrify of all is its face. One eye was completely exposed with no skin along the area and jutting out its head. The girls catch a glimpse of the creature's mouth as it jumps past them to see a human arm hanging from it. The creature flies right beside the girls' raft giving them all a good look of it's horrifying visage before diving back into it's acidic ocean.
The three girls scramble and take cover to avoid the splashes of stomach acid. All three of them are scared stiff from their encounter. They're all searching for what to say when Bianca breaks the silence.
"Stormy?" Bianca says out loud to the shocked faces of her friends.
"Well, glad that's over." Patricia said.
"Wait...what happened to her?" Nicole asked.
"She probably just sank to the bottom." Bianca replied.
"Guys I have a bad feeling about this." Nicole said nervously.
"Can we just get out of here already? I'm starting to get scared." Bianca said sheepishly.
Patricia became annoyed with her two friends. They still needed more filler for their horror movie. And these shots of the decaying bodies and skeletons were perfect.
"Both of you stop being such babies! We're all safe on this raft. Besides we need some more of footage to pad the movie's runtime."
"Easy for you to say. You two just got here. I've seen enough of this and want to go home." Bianca responded.
"Just a few more minutes Bianca. Why don't you stop bitching and focus on filming. And you Nicole keep paddling." Patricia ordered her two friends. With that Nicole picked up her oar and Bianca pointed her cell phone.
The girls did as they were told and continued to explore the horrors of Maria's stomach chamber. As they observed all the digesting corpses Patricia was already thinking about how to enhance the fear for the audience. Maybe she should put a black & white filter with some creepy music playing in the background. She was thinking of all these cool ideas when she felt their raft get rammed from behind.
The jarring impact had all three of the girls grab the edges for stability.
"What the hell was that?" Nicole shouted.
"We must have hit a rock or something?" Patricia tried to rationalize.
"There are no rocks in my mom's stomach! Are you stupid?" Bianca shouted.
"Bianca I wouldn't put it past your mom. That woman is a freak. She ate us thinking we were bugs without any hesitation." Patricia retorted.
"I didn't hear you complaining when we were casting her as our movie monster." Bianca fired back.
"Both of you shut up for a minute. I think I hear something."
All three of the girls went quiet. Indeed along with the organic noises in the background it sounded like something was moving in the the stomach juices.
"Bianca flash your light over there." Nicole directed her friend.
Indeed they could see a ripple forming in the water. It continued towards them gradually building up speed. The girls stared at the disturbance when the saw a bright orange fin emerge. Whatever this was it was on a direct path for their raft.
"Keep rowing!" Patricia shouted.
Nicole furiously rowed desperately to get them away from this thing but it was far too fast and right on their tale. The girls were looking forward when the thing emerges and jumps out of the stomach acids. Turning around to see it they get their first look at the horrific creature stalking them.
The thing is the size of a great white. Its body have been eaten away at by Maria's stomach acid. Parts of it's body now just covered by patches of raw red scales. What was once it's tale is whittled down a sharp spear of bone. Most horrify of all is its face. One eye was completely exposed with no skin along the area and jutting out its head. The girls catch a glimpse of the creature's mouth as it jumps past them to see a human arm hanging from it. The creature flies right beside the girls' raft giving them all a good look of it's horrifying visage before diving back into it's acidic ocean.
The three girls scramble and take cover to avoid the splashes of stomach acid. All three of them are scared stiff from their encounter. They're all searching for what to say when Bianca breaks the silence.
"Stormy?" Bianca says out loud to the shocked faces of her friends.
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