Sunrise Surprise
Family's New Shrink Ray
chapter 11
by
copier
· original author:
pats2015
Derek watched in fear as the ray buzzed to life and activated sending a prolonged beam directly at the wall of his mom's stomach. Derek didn't know what had happened outside of the stomach chamber but he knew it wasn't good.
"Uh oh."
Debbie was just starting to get going this morning. Grabbing a fresh cup of coffee and still dressed in her pjs she to exited towards her backyard to look out at the rising sun peaking over the neighborhood. Braving herself for the day ahead she was about to take her first sip of the hot beverage when she felt a strange feeling in her gut. Maybe a bit of indigestion from that slice of chocolate cake. She knew she shouldn't snack late at night as she always regretted it in the morning. But this felt different. Her thoughts were interrupted when she felt a burning pain in her stomach. Debbie dropped her coffee cup and grasped at her stomach in pain as her body began to expand rapidly. As her bare feet busted through the backyard fence and her scale grew she quickly shot up past her house covering it in darkness. When her growth finally ceased the rooftop of her modest suburban home now only reached up to her shins.
Debbie opened her eyes in shock as she towered over the stirring neighborhood. She opened her mouth to gasp just as formation of geese making their morning flight flew into her path. The geese's V formation got caught in the powerful jet stream of her sudden inhale and were pulled into the mouth's dark abyss. Debbie instinctively gulped in shock sending the entire flock down her throat. Debbie blushed in embarrassment as to her the birds were the size of gnats.
Back in Debbie's stomach Derek sat uneasy wondering how much worse the situation had gotten outside? He would would get his answer sooner than he thought as above him he heard Debbie's powerful muscles go to work bringing down another guest. He looked up as the organic tunnel above opened dropping down Debbie's latest food. Derek's vision was a bit obscured by the darkness and at first all he heard was loud honking and wondered eerily if his mom had eaten a car. As more of the things dropped in he saw that they were small. Smaller than any vehicle and smaller than him. Then he heard the flapping of what sounded like bird wings and it finally clicked in his head.
"Geez Mom I know you love your Canadian bacon at breakfast, but didn't think you ate Canadian geese."
This joke came with the realization that that hit from the shrink ray had grown Debbie to monstrous size if she could swallow these geese like bugs. The birds proportion to him did mean that he was back to his original size just now a prisoner in his unaware giant mom. Good news for him but very bad news for everyone else. He would have to worry about that later as he had to focus on getting out of here.
Derek looked around the stomach and noticed that many of the geese had dropped directly into the acid lake. Most of the geese had their wings broken and or covered in mucus on the way down the throat making them unable to fly. Derek looked away as numerous geese sank into the stomach acid covering his ears from the horrific sounds they made while Debbie's stomach went to work. It was then that he noticed one goose had been spared the horrific fate. A bit bigger than the rest of its flock it stood right the edge of the cake seemingly unharmed and able to fly. Derek looked at the goose and thought it may be his ticket out of here but not at it's current size. He needed to get the shrink ray.
Back in the neighborhood...
"Uh oh."
Debbie was just starting to get going this morning. Grabbing a fresh cup of coffee and still dressed in her pjs she to exited towards her backyard to look out at the rising sun peaking over the neighborhood. Braving herself for the day ahead she was about to take her first sip of the hot beverage when she felt a strange feeling in her gut. Maybe a bit of indigestion from that slice of chocolate cake. She knew she shouldn't snack late at night as she always regretted it in the morning. But this felt different. Her thoughts were interrupted when she felt a burning pain in her stomach. Debbie dropped her coffee cup and grasped at her stomach in pain as her body began to expand rapidly. As her bare feet busted through the backyard fence and her scale grew she quickly shot up past her house covering it in darkness. When her growth finally ceased the rooftop of her modest suburban home now only reached up to her shins.
Debbie opened her eyes in shock as she towered over the stirring neighborhood. She opened her mouth to gasp just as formation of geese making their morning flight flew into her path. The geese's V formation got caught in the powerful jet stream of her sudden inhale and were pulled into the mouth's dark abyss. Debbie instinctively gulped in shock sending the entire flock down her throat. Debbie blushed in embarrassment as to her the birds were the size of gnats.
Back in Debbie's stomach Derek sat uneasy wondering how much worse the situation had gotten outside? He would would get his answer sooner than he thought as above him he heard Debbie's powerful muscles go to work bringing down another guest. He looked up as the organic tunnel above opened dropping down Debbie's latest food. Derek's vision was a bit obscured by the darkness and at first all he heard was loud honking and wondered eerily if his mom had eaten a car. As more of the things dropped in he saw that they were small. Smaller than any vehicle and smaller than him. Then he heard the flapping of what sounded like bird wings and it finally clicked in his head.
"Geez Mom I know you love your Canadian bacon at breakfast, but didn't think you ate Canadian geese."
This joke came with the realization that that hit from the shrink ray had grown Debbie to monstrous size if she could swallow these geese like bugs. The birds proportion to him did mean that he was back to his original size just now a prisoner in his unaware giant mom. Good news for him but very bad news for everyone else. He would have to worry about that later as he had to focus on getting out of here.
Derek looked around the stomach and noticed that many of the geese had dropped directly into the acid lake. Most of the geese had their wings broken and or covered in mucus on the way down the throat making them unable to fly. Derek looked away as numerous geese sank into the stomach acid covering his ears from the horrific sounds they made while Debbie's stomach went to work. It was then that he noticed one goose had been spared the horrific fate. A bit bigger than the rest of its flock it stood right the edge of the cake seemingly unharmed and able to fly. Derek looked at the goose and thought it may be his ticket out of here but not at it's current size. He needed to get the shrink ray.
Back in the neighborhood...
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