In his mouth
Family's New Shrink Ray
chapter 9
by
copier
· original author:
wanderer887
Steve didn't get much further out of the test changer before stopping again. His eyes were fixated on the minuscule Dodge Charger. The shrunken vehicle was the culmination of all his hard work, and yet it was no bigger than a bug, such a huge accomplishment at such a diminished size. It would be so easy just to accidentally crush it between two of his fingers, or drop it thousands of feet down onto the floor.
Raising his index finger up to his eye, Steve could barely make out the details on the car. He thought he could maybe see the white of the license plate, and possibly distinguish the black of the tinted windows from the black finish on the car, but it was a struggle at best. Had Steven pulled out a magnifying glass, or better yet, a microscope, he would have been able to see the more important detail of his oldest daughter waving her arms behind the tinted windshield. Lisa was trying her absolute best to get her colossal Dad's attention, but to no avail.
--
"Dad! Dad!" She screamed. Her father's eye was massive, easily the size of a multistory building, but for all it's size it couldn't see her. She had a perfect view of the breathtaking details of his iris, the intricate patterning of the veins on the edges of his sclera, and the inky darkness of his pupil. The massive pupil darted about, focusing on every aspect of the car minus it's tiny stowaway. She hadn't gotten a good look at the rest of his face when he had raised her up but it was equally monstrous as well. His torso had seemingly gone on for miles, his neck might as well have been a football field long, to say nothing of the enormity of his mouth and nose. Lisa contemplated getting out of the car to better get her Dad's attention, but as she debated if she'd be blown away by a single breathe of his outside the safety of the vehicle, his finger began to move once more...
--
Still observing the tiny car Steve's mind wandered back to how fun it would be to be a giant. He imagined how powerful he would seem to anyone reduced to such a pathetic size, and how terrified anyone that small would be at the realization of what had happened. A vignette began to play in his head of him sneaking up on a car at the local make-out point, before whipping out the gun and cutting them down to literal size. Like a scene out of a B-movie, it'd be the local college football star and his hot girlfriend, except instead of a werewolf or a guy with a hook for his hand, it would just be Steve, wrapping his fingers around the puny vehicle, and yanking it out of the grass.
The camera would cut to a view of the couple on top of each other, their magical night interrupted by an unknown interloper, the windows blanked out by a mysterious force. They'd grab each other for safety and comfort as they hurtled towards their destination, and through the windshield of the car they'd see a monster pair of lips begin to part, revealing two rows of building sized teeth and a quivering tongue, trembling with anticipation.
"Come to Daddy..." Steve muttered under his breathe, before bringing his index finger inside of his mouth.
--
"NOOOOOO!" Lisa howled. It was all in vain however, as her monster of a Dad pushed the car inside of his mouth. Lips as wide as several city blocks closed behind Lisa, and as Steve drew his finger back two massive teeth brushed the car off his digit. She screamed again as the car dropped down a few stories, coming to rest on a tongue of unfathomable size. Stuck in complete darkness, Lisa gripped the seat of the chair. The sound of heavy breathing filled Steve's ravenous maw, and the window of the Charger flooded with condensation. Not that she'd know however, as with his lips tightly pursed Steven has trapped his daughter in complete darkness, unable to see even a foot in front of her.
--
Steve slowly pulled his finger out of his mouth, relishing the feeling of the tiny car stuck on his tongue. He began bouncing the vehicle up and down on his tongue. It barely felt like anything, only slightly larger than a sprinkle off of an ice cream sundae. Rolling it back, he deposited the car into the middle of his tongue before summoning a wave of saliva and pushing it forward. Steve was totally lost in the fantasy now, of himself as a big bad giant was a tiny couple fighting for their lives inside his giant mouth. He pushed it forwards and let it slip under his tongue, holding the car underneath the massive fleshly appendage, soaking it with his saliva. It tasted so good, and he began to let his mind wander yet again to all the different ideas he had for shrunken cars, making a mental note to visit a parking garage and get all the ingredients he would needed for an ice cream and car sundae.
--
Underneath his tongue, Lisa was panicking. She was in total darkness, and when Steve rolled the car back in his mouth, it had flipped over. To her ever growing horror, he had dunked the car into a pool of his saliva,which was now beginning to leak into car. Scrambling to reorient herself, Lisa was slipping in her Dad's spit and wound up positively drenched in it. Feeling the liquid begin to rise up past her waist, Lisa decided to...
Raising his index finger up to his eye, Steve could barely make out the details on the car. He thought he could maybe see the white of the license plate, and possibly distinguish the black of the tinted windows from the black finish on the car, but it was a struggle at best. Had Steven pulled out a magnifying glass, or better yet, a microscope, he would have been able to see the more important detail of his oldest daughter waving her arms behind the tinted windshield. Lisa was trying her absolute best to get her colossal Dad's attention, but to no avail.
--
"Dad! Dad!" She screamed. Her father's eye was massive, easily the size of a multistory building, but for all it's size it couldn't see her. She had a perfect view of the breathtaking details of his iris, the intricate patterning of the veins on the edges of his sclera, and the inky darkness of his pupil. The massive pupil darted about, focusing on every aspect of the car minus it's tiny stowaway. She hadn't gotten a good look at the rest of his face when he had raised her up but it was equally monstrous as well. His torso had seemingly gone on for miles, his neck might as well have been a football field long, to say nothing of the enormity of his mouth and nose. Lisa contemplated getting out of the car to better get her Dad's attention, but as she debated if she'd be blown away by a single breathe of his outside the safety of the vehicle, his finger began to move once more...
--
Still observing the tiny car Steve's mind wandered back to how fun it would be to be a giant. He imagined how powerful he would seem to anyone reduced to such a pathetic size, and how terrified anyone that small would be at the realization of what had happened. A vignette began to play in his head of him sneaking up on a car at the local make-out point, before whipping out the gun and cutting them down to literal size. Like a scene out of a B-movie, it'd be the local college football star and his hot girlfriend, except instead of a werewolf or a guy with a hook for his hand, it would just be Steve, wrapping his fingers around the puny vehicle, and yanking it out of the grass.
The camera would cut to a view of the couple on top of each other, their magical night interrupted by an unknown interloper, the windows blanked out by a mysterious force. They'd grab each other for safety and comfort as they hurtled towards their destination, and through the windshield of the car they'd see a monster pair of lips begin to part, revealing two rows of building sized teeth and a quivering tongue, trembling with anticipation.
"Come to Daddy..." Steve muttered under his breathe, before bringing his index finger inside of his mouth.
--
"NOOOOOO!" Lisa howled. It was all in vain however, as her monster of a Dad pushed the car inside of his mouth. Lips as wide as several city blocks closed behind Lisa, and as Steve drew his finger back two massive teeth brushed the car off his digit. She screamed again as the car dropped down a few stories, coming to rest on a tongue of unfathomable size. Stuck in complete darkness, Lisa gripped the seat of the chair. The sound of heavy breathing filled Steve's ravenous maw, and the window of the Charger flooded with condensation. Not that she'd know however, as with his lips tightly pursed Steven has trapped his daughter in complete darkness, unable to see even a foot in front of her.
--
Steve slowly pulled his finger out of his mouth, relishing the feeling of the tiny car stuck on his tongue. He began bouncing the vehicle up and down on his tongue. It barely felt like anything, only slightly larger than a sprinkle off of an ice cream sundae. Rolling it back, he deposited the car into the middle of his tongue before summoning a wave of saliva and pushing it forward. Steve was totally lost in the fantasy now, of himself as a big bad giant was a tiny couple fighting for their lives inside his giant mouth. He pushed it forwards and let it slip under his tongue, holding the car underneath the massive fleshly appendage, soaking it with his saliva. It tasted so good, and he began to let his mind wander yet again to all the different ideas he had for shrunken cars, making a mental note to visit a parking garage and get all the ingredients he would needed for an ice cream and car sundae.
--
Underneath his tongue, Lisa was panicking. She was in total darkness, and when Steve rolled the car back in his mouth, it had flipped over. To her ever growing horror, he had dunked the car into a pool of his saliva,which was now beginning to leak into car. Scrambling to reorient herself, Lisa was slipping in her Dad's spit and wound up positively drenched in it. Feeling the liquid begin to rise up past her waist, Lisa decided to...
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