In her mouth, he was in danger of being swallowed Family's New Shrink Ray chapter 23 by copier · original author: marcinballa

Derek screamed as the hurricane force wind sucked him towards a massive, dark cave. His eyes widened, he was in full panic mode now as he he noticed something terrifying about this cave. Teeth.

This "cave" was the mouth of his mother. When she gasped after reading the text, she generated enough force to suck the poor guy into her mouth.

Derek looked on and braced for impact as he rapidly approached a massive pink creature resembling a sea monster.

With a splash, Derek landed on his mother's tongue and went rolling. He was disoriented, dazed, confused, and now, soaked in his mom's saliva. "This day sucks," Derek yelled to himself. Much to his horror, everything around him started to get dark. Durning around, he saw his mom was closing her mouth. "No mom don't!" he yelled.

Debbie closed her mouth after her gasp and tried to stay as still as possible. She had no idea of where her tiny son was, and was now just waiting anxiously for a text message relaying that information to her.

In the damp cave of his mom's mouth, Derek could not see a thing. His phone must've fallen off somewhere, as he couldn't feel it in his pocket. Then he saw a light near the back of her tongue. It was his phone lighting up, she must be texting him.

Derek trudged through the saliva m, desperately trying to reach his phone. He noticed it also seemed to be slowly drifting away, like nearing his mother's throat. He knew he needed to get it before she swallowed it.

Is he able to get to the phone?
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