Debbie sucks all the air out of the room
Family's New Shrink Ray
chapter 10
by
copier
· original author:
pats2015
Seeing the tiny woman cower in fear at the sight of her giant eye is so satisfying for Debbie. The look of horror and panic is exactly the reaction she was hoping for. But as Debbie scans the inside of the living room everyone seems a little too comfortable in there for her liking. And Angela needs to come out so Debbie can have a chat about her parenting style. But how could she get Angela out without destroying the whole house. It then dawns on Debbie what to do as she moves her lips over the the door frame and begins to inhale deeply.
Inside Angela crawls backwards at the sight of the giant eye staring back at her. The girls continue screaming and crying all while Angela is is sitting petrified on the ground unable stop staring back at the giant pupil trained on her. When she sees the oval ascend out of view her relief is short lived as it is replaced by a giant pair of smiling pink lips twisted in a smile. They part to reveal rows of boulder sized white teeth. Slowly Angela feels herself being pulled towards the opening and she scrambles to grab the edge of the bathroom door frame. As the gusts pick up Angela shouts back at the girls in the living room.
"Girls grab on to something quick!"
The girls aren't as quick to recognize what is going on. At the behest of Angela's warning they all scramble to try and find something to hang on to or some place to hide. The leader of the mean girls decides to hide behind the couch while her two cronies decide to hide behind the flipped over coffee table. Adrianna starts to crawl her way over to her mother all while Angela mouths for her not to. Nicole who has the most knowledge about what is going on finds a linen closet and shoves herself inside. None of them estimated the power of Debbie's in breath.
As the wind from Debbie's inhale starts to pick up everything not of significant weight begins to get drawn towards the door's opening. All the broken glass, picture frames, and lamps. Everything the girls set up for their sleepover including their snacks, sleeping bags, pillows, and board games all gone out the door. Only Angela gets a good view of their final destination as she watches them disappear into the pinkish red void never to be seen again.
The intensity of the inhale only seems to increase for everyone trapped inside. Angela feels her body being pulled up along the door frame. She feels her bathrobe start to slip off her body when her slippers fly right off her feet and get sucked up. Her daughter Adrianna stays low to the ground but she is slowly being dragged towards the door opening, her nails leaving marks on the hardwood floor. The two girls behind the coffee table can feel their make shift shelter being pulled away and are in danger of being exposed. The leader of the rotten eggs ignores their cries for help and continues to cower behind the couch. Nicole is the least exposed but is hardly thriving as one step out of the closet door frame would spell her doom.
Inside Angela crawls backwards at the sight of the giant eye staring back at her. The girls continue screaming and crying all while Angela is is sitting petrified on the ground unable stop staring back at the giant pupil trained on her. When she sees the oval ascend out of view her relief is short lived as it is replaced by a giant pair of smiling pink lips twisted in a smile. They part to reveal rows of boulder sized white teeth. Slowly Angela feels herself being pulled towards the opening and she scrambles to grab the edge of the bathroom door frame. As the gusts pick up Angela shouts back at the girls in the living room.
"Girls grab on to something quick!"
The girls aren't as quick to recognize what is going on. At the behest of Angela's warning they all scramble to try and find something to hang on to or some place to hide. The leader of the mean girls decides to hide behind the couch while her two cronies decide to hide behind the flipped over coffee table. Adrianna starts to crawl her way over to her mother all while Angela mouths for her not to. Nicole who has the most knowledge about what is going on finds a linen closet and shoves herself inside. None of them estimated the power of Debbie's in breath.
As the wind from Debbie's inhale starts to pick up everything not of significant weight begins to get drawn towards the door's opening. All the broken glass, picture frames, and lamps. Everything the girls set up for their sleepover including their snacks, sleeping bags, pillows, and board games all gone out the door. Only Angela gets a good view of their final destination as she watches them disappear into the pinkish red void never to be seen again.
The intensity of the inhale only seems to increase for everyone trapped inside. Angela feels her body being pulled up along the door frame. She feels her bathrobe start to slip off her body when her slippers fly right off her feet and get sucked up. Her daughter Adrianna stays low to the ground but she is slowly being dragged towards the door opening, her nails leaving marks on the hardwood floor. The two girls behind the coffee table can feel their make shift shelter being pulled away and are in danger of being exposed. The leader of the rotten eggs ignores their cries for help and continues to cower behind the couch. Nicole is the least exposed but is hardly thriving as one step out of the closet door frame would spell her doom.
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