Through the Not So Pearly Gates
Family's New Shrink Ray
chapter 56
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pats2015
"I'm going to enjoy this SO SO MUCH. So long Debbie and thanks. None of this would've possible without you. Oh and don't worry you won't be lonely in there for too long."
Debbie was too shocked to offer any last words or pleas for mercy. Not that Erica would've listened.
"What did she mean by that? Who did Erica plan to eat next?"
The mighty jaws bigger than a car garage opened and Debbie was blasted by the most foul stench she had ever experienced. It was like a mix of raw sewage, rotten meat, and iron. It was no mystery what the happened to anyone who entered as in the light of the moon Debbie could see bits of flesh and bone packed into the crevices between giant crimson stained teeth. It was like a scene from a horror move and now it was Debbie's turn to experience it first hand.
The older nurse felt the hand release and suddenly gravity returned as she and the mass of fish were dropped on to Erica's tongue. Debbie hit the slimy whale like muscle hard. Though most would expect a soft landing the taste buds were rough, akin to sand paper on Debbie's already bruised and beaten body. The older woman barely had time to get her bearings before the floor beneath began to rise like the incline on her treadmill back home.
Erica wasted no time sending Debbie to her much deserved final destination. It was only right her former neighbor die the same way Cody did, dissolved by her stomach acid. The little bitch was resourceful. Erica would give her that. As much as she would've liked to savor the feeling of the helpless woman in her mouth she didn't want to give Debbie any opportunity for escape. Besides, with her rival soon to be dispatched Erica had to focus on much grander plans like reshaping the world to serve her needs. First of which, who else she would need to had dispose of next.
How quickly things could flip on you. It had been Debbie's plan to lure the two giantesses out to sea in order to save lives. That had ended up costing possibly her husband's, sweet innocent Beth's, and Debbie's own life. Worst of all if Erica last words were to be believed Derek and Johnny were so to be the cherries on the shit sunday. And that was probably just the start.
In her heart Debbie knew Erica wouldn't be gracious enough to give her a quick death between her molars. Eating her wasn't about hunger, it was about revenge. She would swallowed and sent down to the acidic chamber below. Where she'd stew and second guess every decision that lead her here while her mind broke as her body was eaten away.
Debbie clawed at the massive tongue as waves of fish tumbled past her and plummeted down the dark hole. A mere appetizer to awaken Erica's hunger. The worst part was instead of being surround by family and loved ones all Debbie could see at her sides was bits and parts of what used to be people. A gruesome reminder of what Erica's mouth represented to all who entered. It was Death's waiting room. For Debbie it was the beginning of her descent into Hell.
Debbie was too shocked to offer any last words or pleas for mercy. Not that Erica would've listened.
"What did she mean by that? Who did Erica plan to eat next?"
The mighty jaws bigger than a car garage opened and Debbie was blasted by the most foul stench she had ever experienced. It was like a mix of raw sewage, rotten meat, and iron. It was no mystery what the happened to anyone who entered as in the light of the moon Debbie could see bits of flesh and bone packed into the crevices between giant crimson stained teeth. It was like a scene from a horror move and now it was Debbie's turn to experience it first hand.
The older nurse felt the hand release and suddenly gravity returned as she and the mass of fish were dropped on to Erica's tongue. Debbie hit the slimy whale like muscle hard. Though most would expect a soft landing the taste buds were rough, akin to sand paper on Debbie's already bruised and beaten body. The older woman barely had time to get her bearings before the floor beneath began to rise like the incline on her treadmill back home.
Erica wasted no time sending Debbie to her much deserved final destination. It was only right her former neighbor die the same way Cody did, dissolved by her stomach acid. The little bitch was resourceful. Erica would give her that. As much as she would've liked to savor the feeling of the helpless woman in her mouth she didn't want to give Debbie any opportunity for escape. Besides, with her rival soon to be dispatched Erica had to focus on much grander plans like reshaping the world to serve her needs. First of which, who else she would need to had dispose of next.
How quickly things could flip on you. It had been Debbie's plan to lure the two giantesses out to sea in order to save lives. That had ended up costing possibly her husband's, sweet innocent Beth's, and Debbie's own life. Worst of all if Erica last words were to be believed Derek and Johnny were so to be the cherries on the shit sunday. And that was probably just the start.
In her heart Debbie knew Erica wouldn't be gracious enough to give her a quick death between her molars. Eating her wasn't about hunger, it was about revenge. She would swallowed and sent down to the acidic chamber below. Where she'd stew and second guess every decision that lead her here while her mind broke as her body was eaten away.
Debbie clawed at the massive tongue as waves of fish tumbled past her and plummeted down the dark hole. A mere appetizer to awaken Erica's hunger. The worst part was instead of being surround by family and loved ones all Debbie could see at her sides was bits and parts of what used to be people. A gruesome reminder of what Erica's mouth represented to all who entered. It was Death's waiting room. For Debbie it was the beginning of her descent into Hell.
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