Sleep Disturbed
Family's New Shrink Ray
chapter 27
by
copier
· original author:
pats2015
As Suzy passed through the threshold of giant lips it was like stepping through a portal into another world. The closest thing the teen could compare it to was a musty cave, but that wouldn't do the absolute hellscape she entered justice.
The temperature immediately ratcheted up inside Madeline's maw. Suzy began to pour sweat in places she never had before. Her soaked clothes became the first of many burdens she would have to carry. Her thirst also became a concern. It was almost as if with every in breath Madeline was sucking the moisture of her. Her thirst became so great at one point she eyed a long string of the giant woman's saliva as it dripped down with envy.
Next was the dampness. As Suzy took her first step onto the inside of Madeline's cheek her feet became soaked to the bone. Worse as if sensing the tiny teen's presence the walls and ceiling began to secrete saliva. The spit pooled on the floor and flowed like a riven out the mouth. This made Suzy trek towards the back of the throat extra treacherous.
Suzy could've handled all that if it weren't for the smell. Upon leaving the fresh air of the neighborhood behind her Suzy immediately regretted not bringing a nose plug. If she thought Madeline's breath was bad when she was berating them this was a whole other level.
As Suzy got closer Madeline's breathing would push her back before then pulling her in closer. Each time Suzy had to stop and brace to be hit by a wave of smelly breath, only then to dig in to prevent from being sucked up. The last thing she wanted was to sent down the wrong pipe and be trapped in one of Madeline's lungs or worse lost in her nose hair.
Still Suzy pressed on, little by little. She had taken all that the slumbering karen had to throw at her and it only made her more steadfast in her mission. Her parents were counting on her.
Suzy neared the back of the throat. Once she took this leap gravity and Madeline's body would take it from here. There was no going back. Hopefully her friends would do their part otherwise all she was doing was feeding herself this big bitch. Still it was better than living as Madeline's servant.
Suzy neared the edge and prepared for her descent. She did one last mental checklist in her head.
"Mom! Dad! Hang on! I'm coming to rescue you!" Susan shouted down the dark organic tunnel.
She did this more for herself than anything. Instead of the voices of her parents in reply she noticed a change in the giant karen's steady breathing. Then without warning her environment began to shift. The resulting quake caused Suzy to fall on her back and the slick surface began to dragged her down towards the throat.
Outside, Suzy's friends took note of Madeline's restlessness and each tried to act in the way they thought was best.
Beth knowing how determined Suzy was to rescue her parents immediately began to rub the giant wall of stomach flesh next to her. Like rubbing an upset tummy Beth hoped this would soothe Madeline and help her fall back to sleep so Suzy could go through with her plan. As she rubbed the tough skin Beth worried if the Williams were the reason of Madeline's gastric distress.
Todd meanwhile put his friend's safety above the mission. He wasn't going to lose Suzy because of some daring rescue attempt. He began to pull back the lifeline hoping to get Suzy out before the big bitch woke up and noticed the teen in her mouth. Todd clawed at the rope so much blisters began to form, but he did not stop. In the back of his head he worried that if he didn't pull fast enough the giantess may just slurp up his end of the rope like a spaghetti noodle.
The temperature immediately ratcheted up inside Madeline's maw. Suzy began to pour sweat in places she never had before. Her soaked clothes became the first of many burdens she would have to carry. Her thirst also became a concern. It was almost as if with every in breath Madeline was sucking the moisture of her. Her thirst became so great at one point she eyed a long string of the giant woman's saliva as it dripped down with envy.
Next was the dampness. As Suzy took her first step onto the inside of Madeline's cheek her feet became soaked to the bone. Worse as if sensing the tiny teen's presence the walls and ceiling began to secrete saliva. The spit pooled on the floor and flowed like a riven out the mouth. This made Suzy trek towards the back of the throat extra treacherous.
Suzy could've handled all that if it weren't for the smell. Upon leaving the fresh air of the neighborhood behind her Suzy immediately regretted not bringing a nose plug. If she thought Madeline's breath was bad when she was berating them this was a whole other level.
As Suzy got closer Madeline's breathing would push her back before then pulling her in closer. Each time Suzy had to stop and brace to be hit by a wave of smelly breath, only then to dig in to prevent from being sucked up. The last thing she wanted was to sent down the wrong pipe and be trapped in one of Madeline's lungs or worse lost in her nose hair.
Still Suzy pressed on, little by little. She had taken all that the slumbering karen had to throw at her and it only made her more steadfast in her mission. Her parents were counting on her.
Suzy neared the back of the throat. Once she took this leap gravity and Madeline's body would take it from here. There was no going back. Hopefully her friends would do their part otherwise all she was doing was feeding herself this big bitch. Still it was better than living as Madeline's servant.
Suzy neared the edge and prepared for her descent. She did one last mental checklist in her head.
"Mom! Dad! Hang on! I'm coming to rescue you!" Susan shouted down the dark organic tunnel.
She did this more for herself than anything. Instead of the voices of her parents in reply she noticed a change in the giant karen's steady breathing. Then without warning her environment began to shift. The resulting quake caused Suzy to fall on her back and the slick surface began to dragged her down towards the throat.
Outside, Suzy's friends took note of Madeline's restlessness and each tried to act in the way they thought was best.
Beth knowing how determined Suzy was to rescue her parents immediately began to rub the giant wall of stomach flesh next to her. Like rubbing an upset tummy Beth hoped this would soothe Madeline and help her fall back to sleep so Suzy could go through with her plan. As she rubbed the tough skin Beth worried if the Williams were the reason of Madeline's gastric distress.
Todd meanwhile put his friend's safety above the mission. He wasn't going to lose Suzy because of some daring rescue attempt. He began to pull back the lifeline hoping to get Suzy out before the big bitch woke up and noticed the teen in her mouth. Todd clawed at the rope so much blisters began to form, but he did not stop. In the back of his head he worried that if he didn't pull fast enough the giantess may just slurp up his end of the rope like a spaghetti noodle.
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