Fall of the Land of Lightning Life at the feet of the Naruto girls chapter 14 by copier · original author: steelwoolll

Humming to herself cheerfully, Hinata continued down the stone path, looking at her list.

Land of Fire

Land of Lightning

With the leaf village secured, she knew she had many more people to save before world peace would be achieved. She sighed, stopping and sitting down by a nearby tree. She took off her sandals, and wiggled her purple toes playfully. She smiled at them, knowing that Naruto and the whole village would be safe between them.

There was one side effect that she didn't know she possessed until recently; for every person between her toes, she gained a fraction of their chakra and power. She could sustain her byakugan longer, and farther. She felt more force between her attacks. Her reaction time and agility had improved significantly. This phenomenon shocked her, but she knew that it would be necessary later.

She leaned in closer to the gap between her biggest and second-biggest toes on her right foot; that was where the Hidden Leaf Village lied. Then she started coughing and leaned back, pinching her nose between her fingers. "Wow, my feet really smell horrible." She felt her face heat up, blushing a full shade of red. "Sorry, but it has to be this way," she stammered, "This is the only way you'll be safe" She looked at the sky. "I will protect you Naruto. I will protect everyone." She gazed at her feet once more, scrunching them. Well, at least they look pretty, she thought.

She put her sandals back on and continued her journey to the Land of Lightning.

***

The Raikage sat at his office, working on paperwork when a messenger broke through the heavy doors out of breath. "Raikage! *heave* I *heave* have *coughing*"

The Raikage stood up, scowling. "Spit it out!"

The messenger took a deep breath, and then out. "Sorry. There's a report for you. It's urgent." He held out a scroll.

"Bah, let me see that," he took it in jest, opening it. "What could be so important that you must interrupt me?" His eyes skimmed through, his brow furrowing. "No, no, this cannot be!" He stared in bewilderment at the messenger. "Warn Bee immediately. Tell him to stay hidden."

"Okay, sir, I-" Before he finished his sentence, the Raikage had already left at lightning speed.

***

Hinata looked at the pile of bodies in front of her. "You guys weren't so difficult, now were you?" She sighed. "All I asked was to see your leader too." The villagers of the Lightning Village shrieked and cried in terror. At that instant, the Raikage came forth, and the crowd was relieved.

"What is the meaning of this" he asked venomously.

"I'm glad you came. I was just asking these gentlemen where you were, and they weren't so courteous to me. Is that how you treat a lady around here?"

"You," the Raikage gasped, "You are the rogue ninja of the Hidden Leaf! The one I've heard stories about!" Then he grinned. "There's a generous bounty on your head, you know. A notorious ninja that's been searched for far and wide by nations all around. Would be a shame if someone were to collect it." As he said this, the ground shook as he powered up. An aura of electricity filled the air. His lightning release armor had activated.

Hinata took her stance, activating her byakugan. She began casting the signs for the shrinking jutsu.

The Raikage grinned, and at an instant, disappeared. Hinata bit her lip. He's fast, she thought, I need to be able to focus on him

"Do you know who you are dealing with?" the voice boomed from all around. He came behind Hinata and sent a strong kick, sending her to the ground. "I am the fourth Raikage. No one has ever surpassed my speed. No one." Then he disappeared again at a flash.

Hinata winced, then got up. She rubbed her eyes, and refocused. She could see the chakra flowing around her like a whirlpool. He was running circles around her! This guy really is fast. She closed her eyes, and listened, waiting. Then, at a split second, she activated her Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms.

The Raikage was struck, and was propelled towards a building. His back made contact and caused a huge dent. He got up and scoffed. "Not bad. But not good enough." He wiped his hand against his mouth, and charged at Hinata with a barrage of fists. Hinata used her gentle fist technique to counter, but to no avail; his speed outmatched her, and Hinata was struck with a sharp kick to the stomach, sending her to her knees.

"I thought you were tougher than this." he mused. He kicked her again, sending her sprawling several feet away. "I guess I was wrong."

Hinata coughed.

"You are no shinobi," he continued, "you are a weak, spineless, pitiful girl. A fugitive who has caused the disappearance of many people in the Land of Fire. And for what, I know not, but it is an injustice that shall be resolved by my hands."

He walked towards her, the sound of his steps becoming more and more definite.

"You have walked to my village and slaughtered my people. What has happened to the Leaf Village is none of my concern, but what has happened today is unforgivable." He came near her. "I do not care of money. No, I care for justice. The price of their lives should be fulfilled right here, right now." He raised his hand, and charged it with electricity.

In the distance, a voice was heard. "Bro!"

The Raikage looked up. "Bee? Is that you?"

Bee appeared beside him. "Yeah, it's me. I came to check on what was happening."

Hinata groaned, and looked at the blurred scene in front of her. Their voices were distorted.

"Bee, I told you to stay at the temple!"

"I can't help if I'm curious."

"Bee, you need to follow what I say, when I say!"

Hinata quickly regained her senses, and acted quickly. Reactivating her gentle fist, she hit the chakra points of both of their legs.

They were dazed in shock, and with just enough time, Hinata casted the shrinking jutsu. Both figures shrunk to 1 inch and were unconscious. Getting up, she looked at both of them. "Who's the tough one now?" The villagers stood there, appalled. Hinata smiled at them as she took off her sandals. A dark, sweat stained footprint was printed on each of them. "This," she shouted, "is what happens if you anger your goddess." She took both Raikage and Bee and put them each on the dark stains of her sandals. Then she lifted her feet and inserted them into each sandal. She could hear crunches, then felt their bodies collapse and become a smushed, gooey mess on her soles.

She glanced at the crowd again. What shall I do with them?, she wondered.
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March 13, 2025
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