You wiggle your way up the bag at an agonizing pace. Already, your body is coated in the thin beads of sweat dotting the girl's excited palm as it tightly clenches the bag. The wall of moist skin pressed firmly into your face, threatening to smother you then and there if this girl didn't get her candy soon! It soon becomes clear she can't wait any longer. You hear the top of the bag tear off in a single, sickening strike. The girl's aunt scolds her, but her other hand is already diving into the delicious bag of sweets.

It just so happened that as you emerged from the depths of Caroline's grasp, she was forced to relinquish the bag so the cashier could scan it. Time seems to freeze as you try to get out of this predicament. You try and jump to the cashier's much larger fingers as they grab the bag, but the commotion instead knocks you straight into the bag's opening. A cluster of colorful, sweet-smelling gummy bears cushions your fall, but by the time you can get to your feet, Caroline's greedy hands have already returned to feed. Luckily, the first blow knocks you deep into the back corner where you cower in fear, forced to watch her giant hand enter the bag again and again, dragging a handful of unlucky bears to her monstrous maw. Caroline's obnoxious chewing only makes things worse, as you know, that hell hole is where you're headed.

"Easy there kiddo! Try and at least savor those." The aunt warns. Caroline rolls her eyes but heeds the advice nonetheless. Now, two fingers entered like a crane, plucking the last remaining gummy bears one at a time and dropping them onto her eager tongue. By some miracle, you were the last thing left in the bag. You had hoped your minuscule weight would convince her the bag was empty, but there was no getting past that spoiled girl. The bag flips upside down as you land with a splat onto the girl's clammy palm. You hit the skin and shout up at the giantess, but her eyes aren't even looking at you.

As the door to the gas station swings open, Caroline plops you down onto her tongue. You tried your best to avoid looking into her giant mouth, but as soon as you landed, you couldn't avoid its abuse. Immediately, the squishy, wet tongue lathers you in sticky saliva as taste buds the size of your hands begin to lick you. While there was still light from the outside world, you shouted with all your might, pounding on the tongue's surface with all your might, praying she'll realize you're not a snack. Splatters of saliva splash into your faces as your fists hit the massive tongue. The moment you go to inhale, the stench of the girl's breath fills your nostrils as the horrible environment of her mouth starts to take its toll. The tongue retreats into the mouth as her lips close behind you, sealing you in total darkness.

Because you were the last gummy bear, Caroline doesn't immediately go to chew, instead, the tongue pressed you into her palate, smothering you into its wet flesh as gallons of saliva drain past you. You fight back the best you can, biting down on the nearest taste bud, but as you open your mouth, you're instantly water-boarded with saliva. No matter how much of the disgusting spit you choke down, more seems to flow in from an endless source. You can feel the saliva's enzymes working on you from the inside out, and soon enough, your skin starts to tingle with numbness. The tongue plays with you for what feels like hours, crushing you into the palate, against her teeth, or under its weight. The taste of sickly-sweet saliva and the tongue itself has permeated your mouth.

You start to lose all the sanity you had left. This tongue was a godly leviathan, and you were convinced the only way to end your suffering was to worship it. Every chance it gave you, you started to lick the tongue, begging it to crush you or even better, send you down her awaiting throat. For a split second, Caroline's lips part as she goes to yawn. You can see the bright interior of her aunt's car as a rush of air pushes against your back. Her foul breath nearly chokes you out as you're sent flying to the tip of her tongue. Your salvation was an arm's reach away, as the lips begin to close, you leap with all the strength you have left towards the opening.

CRASH!!!

The lips close tightly around your lower body, crushing it flat. You scream out in pain, your arms and head are barely sticking outside her lips, and as you look up, all you can see are Caroline's giant nostrils and gross strands of mucus deep within them. You hammer her lips, begging to be released, when suddenly, the tongue darts out next to you. The wet flesh you grew so accustomed to smacks roughly into your side, easily sticking you to its surface. You curse this greedy, oblivious girl as the tongue drags you back into hell. It's much rougher this time, the rest of your body is quick to break under its immense weight, and soon enough, Caroline starts to chew. Pushed between her molars, your vision goes white as they clamp down around your arm, tearing it from your body. This new flavor seems to excite the tongue as it pins you under it, and saliva floods around you. You feel death quickly approaching as you start to spasm from lack of oxygen, drowning in Caroline's spit. Just before you do, the tongue releases and hap0hazardly tosses you into the back of her throat. The powerful muscles further break you as you slide down deeper and deeper, eventually popping out into her terrible stomach.

You can't believe it. After all the abuse you suffered, you really were going to die, swallowed by some greedy child. You see the walls expand and contract around you, the smell is so vile you want to vomit, but you're too broken even to do that. You can barely see around you, but you feel the sticky texture of partially digested gummy bears all around you. Nestling against the stomach wall, you await your demise. Barely a snack for this giant girl...

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May 13, 2025
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